24.4.15 Saye Mogo Bana
Saye Mogo BanaWe missed the clear-fast-roadsby at least 30 minutes,but the jam-slow-roads are still an hour away. I should be onthe metro, but I was late and lazyand so I stood for ten minutes onthis...
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Quite a ride, this, both the journey on the Delhi BRT and the hot-here-there-rattle-zoom. I really like the "shaky shaky weave and dart." Very vivid word play and imagery. Did you get to Let's Make a...
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Did I ever tell you how lucky you are? (I'm quoting from Seuss, a book I used to read to my then-young son, but it's true) You make it clear that the I is not merely its local self, but can be, and...
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Very entertaining ride! Love the patter of the N, whether spoken or just thought, with the driver. These lines elevate the poem even further, make the dusty, fast ride joyful: my...
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This was worth the ride: like a dusty hot fudge sundae on wheels. LOTS to like here and enjoyed reading your work.
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The N certainly makes missing public transportation and ending up taking the long and dusty way sound tempting. Nice ride!
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Yea, it was a good 3 wheeler ride. And the soundtrack made it even better, in a surreal way. I don't usually tune out, but once in a while, it's fun to do. And Terry, every ride starts with 'let's...
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